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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Everyone dreams about the future. I also have a dream about my life in 20 years. I will live in Shanghai with my family because we like it very much. It will be more beautiful. I will teach in a middle school. I will be a good English teacher. I will love my students, and my students will love me, too. We will be good friends. I will do sports with my students every day. Swimming and running will be my favorite sports. I will be healthy and strong. There will be more robots everywhere. They will help us do many things. I believe we will have more time to study and play. This is my future dream. What do you think of it?
