2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(30)写作:My hometown

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I live in a quiet and beautiful town. There is less air pollution in my town than in other areas in Wu Xi. It is close to the center, It only takes 15 minutes to go there by bus. There is a park in the town. People like taking exercise in the park every morning. My favourite place is the youth center because there are lots of things to do there