简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
on the moring i help my mother do the housework take part in waterreklated activities such as swimming,u see , there are many acttivities for me to enjot .in the afteen, in oder to close to nature and relieve a stree . i find a new way to relax and unwind.our society needs international people with foreign languages skills to communicate in order to business culture exchange and so on.in the evening i meet more different p from different backgrounds