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I have a new pet.It is a dog.It is Pigu.It is eleven year old.It is very cute.It has long legs,and it has big eyes and long ears.It‘s very big.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone and running in the garden.Sometimes It likes playing with a ball.I like my pet -Pigu very much.