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Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? It is my hornor for being here to delivering a English speech for our activity group of extra curricurrum. Today I would like to talk about the television issue. Generally, we expand our field of vision from watching TV. Before TV come out of the world, people communication restricted in a small distance. people transported their thoughts,news by talking, even though people can hear news from cellphone