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The day my classmate got injured. He fell on the ground, it looks a bit funny. But he still sprained his a ancle and got brace on his knee, he is breeding. He looks painful, so I handed him to the doctor's office. The doctor cleaned his wound and band-aid it, for the ancle, the doctor did massage to helped my classmate to relieved the pain. After the treatment, my classmate got better. But when we want to pay the doctor, we both realize that we did not bring our wallet, we got embarrassment. We talked to the doctor, the doctor did not angry at us and still friendly to us. We were thinking of call our teacher to help, the teacher heard and worried about my classmate. He rusted to the doctor office and pay the fee. After than that, he helped my classmate to get home and said he will take the day off for my classmate. Afterward I thinking of helping my friend is a very please thing, the doctor and the teacher are very nice, it lets me fell the love of the world.
