2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

How should parents help children to be independent?This is a hot potato to most parents. Nowadays,children are given what they want.It is an unfavorable phenomena.Parents frequently do most of the things that should be done by children themselves.After a long period of doing this make children can't do even an easy thing.What's more,the rich in quality gives children an ease environment which make them lose the ability to take care of themselves. In order to let children be independent,parents should try to make a relatively tough environment to cultivate children's characters.The most important is trying to change the mind of dependent on children's brain.