2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China My hometown local in south of China.There is a beautiful city,there have many beautiful and interesting place.If my friend who come for foreign want to visit my honetown,I will like to take him to see a park. The park have a beautiful name good-sea park.There have a long rive along the park,we can take boat see the view.There have a stress named Bar Stress,we can drink dance and chat,if we want.There have a music spring, on the 8 pm,there music spring will opean everyday,in this time there have may pepole dance following the music,and may chidrens run aroun the music spring and laught. I love Good- Sea Park, every holyday I will come here with may friend,I want to my foreign friend know how can I spend my hollyday time.