小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. she is a good gril, she has long yeally hair, big black eyes and a very red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at dancing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.