托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；有效的运用了一些复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

There is a proverb going in China, what you have seen is not always the truth. It tells us that if you don't have enough investigate or evidence, don't judge the result. So some snap judgements are easy to mislead us. I made some mistakes by my impulsive decision for several times. When I was a middle school student, I lived with another 3 students. Once, one of my roommates told us that she lost her wallet which was in her cupboard. She said that nobody known the secret expect Xiaomei because when she put it into the cupboard Xiaomei saw it, and talked with her. At that time, all of us believed that it was Xiaomei stole her wallet because only she was at dormitory today. After that day, all of our classmates refused to make friends with Xiaomei, she was isolated by others. The second semester, she dropped out because she counldn't stand the big pressure from others' judgment. But things didn't end with her leaving, when we finished our middle school career, the one who lost her wallet found her wallet under her desk when we was packaging and cleaning our dormitory. That moment, all of us were shocked and realized that we made a mistake that Xiaomei was innocent. But it was too late to change the result, a student ended her study career and maybe lived in the shadow of others' discussion because of our snap judgement. Even though our intuition is true, never be contorted by this sense. Because there is no regret medicine to sell for us to change the result.