2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；作者在句法层面做的很棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

God will save me A story goes that during the flood a faithful Christian man, who stayed in his house, refused to accept people’s help and just waited for a miracle from God to save him, eventually was drowned in the water. In Heaven, the man complained to God about his helpless, and God answered that he had already assisted the man indirectly by sending a warning and offering the emergency tools. This story might not be true, but it conveys profound messages. On the one hand, although persistence is a virtue, excessive stubbornness will lead to considerable obstacles in our life. Just as Franklin Roosevelt remarked, ”Eternal truths will be neither true nor eternal unless they have fresh meaning for every new social situation.” On the other hand, you will fail to achieve anticipated results on condition that you only negative wait for chances instead of grabbing the opportunities before you. As far as I concerned, with the advance of society and the development of technology, the open-minded spirit should be cultivate to accommodate the new environment. In addition, in order to overcoming the obstacles, we should be adept in creating and taking advantage of opportunities actively.