2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(71):带手机上学

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Dear principle, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school. In our discussion, 70% students agreed we should be bring to school and just 30% students disagree. By agree, students think nowadays mobile phones are more and more importance, we can't keep the students within a certain old discipline. And, you know, all of us have enough economic burdens to buy a mobile phone. And the other side, maybe mobile phone will effect with our study, but we just take the mobile phone in the bookcase when we have lessons. AS well as we know, mobile phone not only can help us communicate with other but also can help us relax when we have more pressure in our busy study. But in the others way, people also think mobile phone is unnecessary, because of we are safe in our school and are not going anywhere. Frankly speaking, bringing the mobile phone is must affect our study, it will make us not focus on the study and always think and talk about the new thing without the lesson. Also, as a student, we will no any money if we without our parent. so if we take the mobile phone to the school, it will arise our parent's economic. Above all are our views about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school. Yours sincerely, Li Hua