英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 高中> 高考英语> 真题> 2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

发布时间:2014-09-30 15:30浏览次数:1030
要求:
请用英语写一篇100个词左右的短文,记述一件发生在你身上(边)的助人为乐的事迹。要求如下:

1. 描述事情经过;  

2. 谈谈你的感想。

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Dear Sir or Madam, It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. From my point of view, the student who is recommended as “the most beautiful student” should be brave,honesty and have a warm heart and so on. My classmate LiHua is such a student with a warm heart and responsibility. I can well remember an accident that occurred on a rainy day, LiHua and I were on our way to library when a girl who is waiting for the green light was knocked down by a passing car which drove off quickly.LiHua immediately rushed to the girl to give her help without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and LiHua sent her to the hospital.Compared with the escaped driver,LiHua is a good person who set a great example to us. LiHua is so warm hearted and responsible that he is the person who can be recommended as “the most beautiful student” in my mind.

会员评论0个评论)
赵宇轩
金币:24

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:71.5xiaoyaofd

人气:49发布:2014-10-31

得分:70.5静静地听

人气:29发布:2014-11-08

得分:67.0angelsoldier

人气:180发布:2014-10-13

得分:66.5任超群

人气:11发布:2014-11-26

得分:66.0杀无赦

人气:20发布:2014-11-15