1. 描述事情经过;
2. 谈谈你的感想。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear Sir or Madam, It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. From my point of view, the student who is recommended as “the most beautiful student” should be brave,honesty and have a warm heart and so on. My classmate LiHua is such a student with a warm heart and responsibility. I can well remember an accident that occurred on a rainy day, LiHua and I were on our way to library when a girl who is waiting for the green light was knocked down by a passing car which drove off quickly.LiHua immediately rushed to the girl to give her help without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and LiHua sent her to the hospital.Compared with the escaped driver,LiHua is a good person who set a great example to us. LiHua is so warm hearted and responsible that he is the person who can be recommended as “the most beautiful student” in my mind.