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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear Mary, I am Wang Yi, monitor of Class 5, Grade 3.I am on behalf of the class to write to you. What do you think of our class? You are very helpful and are friendly to us, all of us like you very much. You are not the teacher who stood in front of the class talking all the time while we students listened, busily taking notes. Instead, you always listen to our voices, and your class is always full of interesting and lively. We also have some advice for your teaching. Some students said sometimes they can’t follow you,so they ask if you can speak a little more slowly. Besides, we think the homework is too much. Why not give us less homework that we can have enough time to prepare our lessons. Thank you for your teaching.
