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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写方面要认真；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear: I was very interesting in the 5670 product made in your company during the exhibition in Neyue on the date of Decmeber 15th to 22th.Please give me a price list and instruction about them.Thanks for your colabouration and hope we could establish business relationship. Happy to you! Hu bin 2015-2-26
