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From:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date:Dec.23th,2008 To:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr.Johnson, We recived the goods of your firm which were toal to 3,000 on Dec.22rd,but the quantity of the products should be 3,500 according to our signing of the NO.35 order and the remains 500 we have not recived so far.Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply ! Yours sincerely Wang Haiyang
