2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

In this moment,more and more children's life were arranged by their parents.In the same word their future is set in stone.Even though children won't follow what their parents said.But most of them finally knuckled under because of the great pressure from their parents. To some extent things is going to south.They is lost their own thought step by step.What's more they are used to rely on their parents.Without their parent they can't do anything.Their future is like a pie in the sky. If you really want your child to get a good future.Parents should let child arrange life by themselves.All of us should shout for stars.So let the nature take its course. At the result they are going to set the world on fire.