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句式变化多样；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
My Ideal of Saving Money As we know,saving money is a traditional virture in china.And recently ,there are many people think that they should save their for their better fulture ,expecially those students who do not have any income.They believe that it is a good habit to save money,and I think so. First of all,students think that it will lessen their families' encnomic stress .Their parents feel very stressful by their expensive tution.So,if they can save the money ,their parents will feel a little relaxed.In the same time ,it is a good chance for students to get independent so that they can be more stronger to face the difficult they will meet one day. What's more,some student believe that it is helpful for them to learn how to account their money.They think in their fulture ,it may be a good skill to help them to get a porper job,and if they can learn how to save and adminstrate their money,they will better hold their family. There is no doubev that saving money is a good habit for student.They do not like those people who can earn so much money,and the money they are spending is not own themselves, so they have to save the money so that they can release their parents' prssure,and cultivate a good habit to account money.
