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As we know,saving money is a traditional virtue of china.Recently,there are many people think that they should save money for their future,especially those students who do not have any income.They believe that it is a good habit to save money,and I think so. First of all,students think that it will lessen their families' economic stress.Their parents feel very stressful by their expensive tuition.So,if they can save the money,their parents will feel a little relaxed.In the same time,it is a good chance for students to get independent so that they can be more stronger to face the difficult they will face one day. What's more,some students believe that it is helpful for them to learn how to manage their money.In their future,it may be a good skill for help them to get a proper job,and if they can learn how to save and manage their money,they will better hold their family. There is no doubt that saving money is a good habit for students.They do not like those people who can earn so much money,and the money they are spending is not own themselves, so they have to save money so that they can lessen their parents' prssure,and cultivate a good habit to manage money.
