3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
She has to have tests every day.And sometimes she has some stress and feel worry.I think this is very normal because we have to study hard and get a good grade in order to make our parents and teachers happy. And we have lots of homework and we have no time to do something else.You Fangfang has this question,too.She always finishes her homework after 10:00 so that she can't listen to music or watch TV to relax.She doesn't know how to relax when she is studying. In order to solve these problems.She finds her teachers and ask her teachers for help.Her teachers give her some good ways to relax.For example,she can conversation with her parents or her friends.And she can play with her classmates at the playground after school. And now,she know the time is important and she can finish her homework in time.She already has a well improve.