3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She has to have some tests every day.And she always has some stress and feel worry.I think these are very normal because we have to study hard and get a good grade to make our parents and teachers happy. She says that she has lots of homework and she always finishes her homework after 10:00.So she has no time to do something else like listening to music or watching TV to relax.She doesn't know how to relax when she is studying. In order to solve her problems,she find her teachers and ask her teachers for help.Her teachers tell her some good ways to relax.For example,she can conversation with her parents and her friends.And she can play with her classmates at the playground after school. And now,she know the time is very important and she can finish her homework in time.She already have a well improve.