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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦94:年级家长会

发布时间:2014-12-31 15:40浏览次数:419
要求:
上周学校举行了初三年级家长会,家长、学生和老师进行了面对面的交流,尤芳芳代表同学们说出了困惑,表示了决心:
因为经常考试,她时常有些压力,有时感到心烦意乱;
作业多,没有时间…;不知如何平衡学习与玩耍.
老师告诉她放松的方法有很多:⑴多与父母或朋友交流,⑵……
现在她知道了时间的重要性,能按时交作业,已经取得很大的进步;
要求:
1、短文要包括列举的要点并且适当发挥。
2、语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。


Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She has to have some tests every day.And she always has some stress and feel worry.I think these are very normal because we have to study hard and get a good grade to make our parents and teachers happy. She says that she has lots of homework and she always finishes her homework after 10:00.So she has no time to do something else like listening to music or watching TV to relax.She doesn't know how to relax when she is studying. In order to solve her problems,she find her teachers and ask her teachers for help.Her teachers tell her some good ways to relax.For example,she can conversation with her parents and her friends.And she can play with her classmates at the playground after school. And now,she know the time is very important and she can finish her homework in time.She already have a well improve.

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