作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My favorite sport is football.Now let me tell you how I fall in love with it. When I was a young boy,once,I found a football on my way home by chance,because I was a naughty boy,I played it with my friends.We played happily so that I absolutely forgot the time.And from then on,I began to love football.During the school time,I often played football with my best friend and practice playing. My favorite football star is Beckham.He is not only cool but also good at football.I hope I can become a professional football player like him in the near future.