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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11046
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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My favorite sport is football.Now let me tell you how I fall in love with it. When I was a young boy,once,I found a football on my way home by chance,because I was a naughty boy at that time,I played it with my friends.We played happily so that I absolutely forgot the time.And from then on,I began to love football.During the school time,I often played football with my best friend and practice playing.We also won some awards for our school and our teacher always praise us.Of course,we became healthier and we knew that unity is the most important. My favorite football star is Beckham.He is not only cool but also good at football.I hope I can become a professional football player like him in the near future.

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