文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. As a graduating students, I’ll give you some advice. First,we should learn to study efficiently,which will help us to save much time.A good habit is also important for us to improve our academic performance. Second,a true and kind heart will help us get along well with others. In the same time, People will be willing to lend a hand to you when you in trouble.Finally,we should mix work and paly. Exercise make people relaxed, it helps us to prevent diseases and better learning.