作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. As a graduating students, I’ll give you some advice. First,, we should learn to study efficiently,which will help us to save much time.A good habit is also important for us to improve our academic performance. Second,a true and kind heart will help us get along well with others. At the same time, people will be willing to communicate with you. .Finally, as an old saying goes, sport is indispensible to life. Exercise make people relaxed, it helps us to prevent diseases and better learning. We should do more exercise in our spare time. Only in this way, can we improve our academic performance and health.