2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown's name is Qingdao. I love the city and i would like intrduce her to you. In Qingdao, there are many landmarks from west to east of city, for example,laoshan,wusi squre,Olmpic game center etc.: In wusi squre which nearby govement build which the center of the city. There is read wind sculputer as the landmark. From 10 mins walk, we can see the Olmpic Game Center which holded 2008 Olmpic games. Qingdao Beer is famous as in qingdao city. In summer, we will hold qingdao international beer festival. People can test different beer which from around the world and enjoy festival programs. In food side, sea food is the best choice, there are many different kinds of sea food from local market. I strong suggest that sea food with qingdao beer which is the best partner. I wish you like my city when you arrive there.