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The day my classmate got injured Our class took place a terrible thing in the afternoon today. because li hua got injured at P.E class. We have a P.E class. at class, we were playing basketball. li hua threw a shadow when we play high. his knee got injured,shed blood.at the same time, i backed up to him without hesitation.we sent him tothe hospital of my school in a hurry. the docter took a cure to him. li hua is good gradually. we felt relief. As fa as i am concerned, i think we should care for each other. our world will turn more and more nice.
