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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
The day my classmate got injured.Our class took place a terrible thing in the afternoon today. Because li hua got injured at P.E class. We have a P.E class. at class, we were playing basketball. Li hua threw a shadow when we play high. His knee got injured,shed blood.At the same time, I backed up to him without hesitation.We sent him to the hospital of my school in a hurry. The Docter took a cure to him. Li hua is good gradually. We felt relief. As far as i am concerned, I think we should care for each other. Our world will turn more and more nice.
可可英语 - 划词释义
