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I am a high school student now.I had facting many things when i was young.Sure,my friend helps me a lot with many things.I learnt many knowldge from it. I rember one thing that about my friend help me with my math.when i was a middle school student,i am not good at math.Sometimes i want to give up,but my friend are stoping me from it.And he helps me with my math,he also told me that never give up.I rember it so far.So,whatever things i met,i never give up.Thanks,my friend.Thank for your heip. Friend is our the honest friend.