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山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:27浏览次数:2593
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根据以下提示,结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing.It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
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(2)除诗歌外,文体不限;
(3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
(4)词数为120左右。
       Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.          
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I am a high school student now.I had facting many things when i was young.Sure,my friend helps me a lot with many things.I learnt many knowledge from it. I remember one thing that about my friend help me with my math.when i was a middle school student,i am not good at math.Sometimes i want to give up,but my friend are stoping me from it.And he helps me with my math,he also told me that never give up.I rember it so far.So,whatever things i met,i never give up.Thanks,my friend.Thank for your heip. Friend is our the honest friend.

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