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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3585
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;若注意文中一些句法错误,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

According to this pie chart,we learn some information about the fast food preferences of teenagers in the united states in this chart,33 percentage younger prefer to eating hamburgers,and younger like eating pizza rather than eating French fries.Percet of 9 teenagers would eating fried chicken and percet of 7 people will choose Tacos.Only 3 percentage younger would like to eat sushi to sum up,American teenagers’ favorite is Hamburgers,just a few people eat sushi

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