雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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According to this pie chart,we learn some information about the fast food preferences of teenagers in the united states in this chart,33 percentage young people prefer to ate hamburgers,it was more than Pizza and french fries.percent of 26 peopel ate pizza and 22 percentage teenagers ate french fries. Percent of 9 teenagers would ate fried chicken and percent of 7 people would choose Tacos.Only 3 percentage young people would like to ate sushi to sum up,American teenagers’ favorite is Hamburgers,but some young people aslo liked pizza and french fries. just a few people ate sushi