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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3584
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

According to this pie chart,we learn some information about the fast food preferences of teenagers in the united states in this chart,33 percentage young people prefer to ate hamburgers,it was more than Pizza and french fries.Percent of 26 people ate pizza and 22 percentage teenagers ate french fries. Percent of 9 teenagers would ate fried chicken and percent of 7 people would choose Tacos.Only 3 percentage young people would liked to ate sushi food. To sum up,American teenagers’ favorite is Hamburgers,but some young people also liked pizza and french fries. just a few people ate sushi food.

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