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mar. 25th, 2008 sunday fine This morning i got up early. after breakfast, i helped mom with housework. then i did my homework. the homework was very interesting, so i did it well. in the afternoon, i played table tennis with my friend lingling, we enjoyed ourselves very much. in the evening i watched tv with my parents and then prepared my self for the next day's lesson. What a busy day today!