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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2871
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

From what is vividly depicted in the above cartoon,we can observe that a driver,as drunken as a fiddler,is driving fast on the road,with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.So speed does the car run that it cannot keep the balance.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implication for everybody. The profound meaning of the dramatic drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing,consciousness of safety should be not only one of our top priorities,but also our life.Life is one-way journey:you cannot experience it twice.Therefore,life is to be respected and awed.It is cruel and inhumane that a man will be end of his life with a careless driving under the influence.For another,to act as a responsible member of the society,each of us should bear social responsibility.We do live for those whom we love and who love us rather than for ourselves. It is irresponsible to claim that lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important,leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and,may be,great living burden. In short,it is imperative that legislative measures be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely including suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides,the mass media,such as TV,radio and website,should work together to enhance awareness of security and sens of responsibility to reduce the rate of the car accident.Only when the whole society will pay close attention to it,can we solve the issue.

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