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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第31篇:发人深思和逗人娱乐的电影你更喜欢哪个

发布时间:2013-08-14 16:41浏览次数:763
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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain.

Which type of movie do you prefer?

发人深思和逗人娱乐的电影你更喜欢哪个?

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注意文中出现的部分句子错误;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Everyday, many movies can be found in the Internet. There are movies which are serious, designed to make the audience think and movies which are designed to amuse and entertain the public. From my point of view, there are significant for us in changing time and different places. • First and foremost, we have many kinds of emotions when we are in different situations. Imaging we have just fail an vital examination which may change our destiny, the pursuit of happiness is the right movie to encourage us to keep on fighting for our future. If the deadline is coming, we have to work from day to night to finish it which makes us exhaust, the kind of amusing and entertain movies is the right thing to make us ease. In addition, when we are in different ages, the view is different such as the dream of the Red Chamber. When I was young, I just focus on the identifies of the main role such as Daiyu Lin and Baoyu Jia who are the lucky guys in our daily life. When I was bigger, I focus on the indentify of the small role such as Yun Jia is just the same with me and many other people who have to do much to change their destiny. In summary, different kinds of moives are all needed for us. When we are in different situation, we need different kinds of movies.

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