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Today is sunday,but I am very busy.On the morning,I have a very good exercise at half past six.Then I eat beakfast at a quarter past seven.After that,I do my homework from a quarter to eight to eight thirty.Then I clean my room.After that,I always piay games with my friends.PM,I either watch TV or play ping-pong.This is a very busy day!