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My Opinion On Certificate craze With the rapid competition of society,more and more people are keen on the all kinds of certificates. Obviously, various certificate grazes are catching most of people's eyes,especially students. So why so many people are interested in diverse certificate crazes? Opinions about this phenomenon differ from person to person.Some people hold the idea that acquiring more certificate can promote their competitive abilities and enrich themselves in the modern professional market.Therefore, the chance to participate the certificate craze is valuable to them,and they never allow them to lose each examnation. However,others only believe that they can find a good job with the assistance of professional certificate. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that certain certificate can improve our competitive abilities,but we should not chase the certificate overly and attend too many examnation which maybe distract our attention to the other pritical skills.
