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字数:300 满分:100分
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As student ,we get money from our parents ,which means we don't have the ability to feed ourself .Whether our parents are rich or poor ,we should not overuse thier money in the unnecessary strategies .In addition ,thrifty life is the traditional virture of our nation.So we should live a simple lifestyle.