小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查；简单句偏多了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend is Zhou tian tian. She studys with me ，she is 17 years old. She is a pretty girl！ She has short hair、big eyes、small nose and a moderate mouth.She likes listening to pop music、doing exercise、going fish、drawing pictures...... We also have lunch together，we often chant on the Internet at Weekends.We have same hobbies. We are good friends，she is my good friend.