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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(25):Effective Ways to Release the Stress

发布时间:2013-07-22 17:51浏览次数:717
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针对目前高三学生学习压力较大的现状,有人以“Effective Ways to Release the Stress”为题于上周调查采访了五个学校的500名高三学生。请你根据以下调查结果的图表写一份报告,并再谈谈自己或身边同学释放压力的有效方法。

  

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1.词数:120左右;

2.调查报告的题目和开头已为你写好(不记入总词数)。
3.参考词汇:心理咨询室the psychological consulting office
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作者词汇基本功很好,但请注意单词拼写的检查;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;请注意分段。

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