假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。
3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢,将它放在书桌上。
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I'm so sorry .I can't go to your party . Because my mum was ill. so I must be care of her in home. And the docter said that my mum relesae in the bed those day.It's bad new. Thank you for send a nice card for me.I love it,and I show it on the table.