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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Today we'll talk about the topic, the effect of education level to the earning and umeployment rate. Obviously, you have higher education level,you will have a higher payment, and meanwhile, you will have lower unemployment rate. But you have to understand, higher education level means higher cost. Not every people can afford to this. For exsample, when you gratuated from university at your age of 24 and get your bachelor degree, people who just have a high scool educaiton level have been working for 4 years. During a short period, people who have a lower education level can earning more than ones who have a higher education level. But on the other hand, we have to say, people who have a higher degree have advantage of their future, just as described in this survey,they will have higher payment and lower unemployment all their work lives. Therefore, we must make the balance of future and existance when you have to make a choise of starting to work or going on education.
