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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
要求:
题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

It Is Wise to Make Friends Online As we all know, with the development of technology, the Internet has become the part of our life. In the meanwhile, millions of young people have made friends online. In my opinion, I stand firmly on the side that we can benefit from making friends online. On the one hand, we can make friends in different regions who have the same interests with us, because we have more common topics to chat with each other than the other friends in real life. We can know more information about our interests at the same time. On the other hand, we can say something from heart to our online friends. They can help us solve problems in an impersonal way. All we know, people are easier to talk about their puzzles to strangers they have never met. In this way, we can not only release ourselves, but also solve the problems in another perspective. From what have mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that it is wise to make friends online.

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