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I visited to the Beijing zoo on weekend.In the zoo,there was too many poeple.They're feed makeys and play with tigers.Animal and human is frendly.we should take care of animal. so we should protect the environment.It's very importion to animal and human.we can't throw the garbage anywhere on zoo.we should take it in the trash so that keep a nice environment.