文章能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
look at this child ,he was dropped out of school.Oh ,he maybe is a bad guy .Everytime, whatever you listened or see ,the conclusions you make immediately always are not wise . The boy that mentioned ,when he was not a child ,he became famous of the principle of three.yes ,the boy named cotnew .I think everyone konw him all over the world .He was so smart and clever.but when he was a child ,no one realised his brilliant thought. This is not the only example told us the view you see,the thing you listen,all of that maybe not the facts .So ,focus on the procession of the thing ,point out the trues.
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