福建福州十五中2012-2013学年八年级下学期月考试卷英语作文

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Working Hard And Keeping Fit Nowadays,middle students used to study hard so that they're have a high pressure.And no time to exercise.As a result,their body stay a sub-healt.The reason for they're ignore exercise and take part in sports seldom. There was a case about ChengHua,a middle student.He had a sick becuase he ignores sports.After,he has a deep realize for health.now,he studies hard and oftens take part activities. Money can't buy a health body.we should keep fit.