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字数：300 满分：100分
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There is a common phenomenon among college students that they catch every chance to save money. As I am concerned,I totally support these behaviour. I have two reasons to support my idea.On the first hand ,we have not been earning yet.All the money we spend is from our parents，and they are paintakingly working night after night while we are buying things we like .If we are not considerate of them but just waste the money when there is a way to reduce their burden,does it really unreasonable ? On the other hand,we are the people who will live on our own in the later life after graduating from college. It is undoubted that we should develop the habit of being economic All in all ,in my views ,these phenomenons can't represent that they can't be smart consumers ,on the contrast ,I think that really show their smart on consuming.
