高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

My Howetown In the pass,my hometown was a nice place where has many trees around.As a green island.In there has a clear river.Fishs plays river happiness.In the narrow steer has builded small huoses.The loacl people lives here simple and happy.But the world is not peace always. Nowadays,the green island have growed mode building,wide steer and the factory.The environment was polluted by the factory.The tree was reduce.The small fish was disappear.So the first save is protect the environment.