使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My View On University Ranking Recently,the problem of University Ranking has been brought into focus with the boom of the University ranking. Lots of University in different area have been evaluated to different class. People's views on the university ranking vary from person to person. Some people are in favour of this idea,and this ranking convince them that they can choose an appropriate school to their children based on the university ranking which can distinguish excellent school from the common school.However,others believe that the university is the kind of discrimination.Speaking frankly, universities are divided into different class,at the same time ,there is no doubt that the students will be distinguished and accept different treating. In my opinion, I neither agree nor disagree this idea, because I think that the university ranking not only have advantages but disadvages. If we can rationaliy treat the ranking,it will benefit our education development.
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